haikuSaloon: Traces

weeping into sleep
she slips gently to her left
to a space he kept

Raven said...: Lovely.; June 17, 2008 at 3:08 PM
Anonymous said...: sublime...; June 18, 2008 at 12:30 AM
DeLi said...: poignant!; June 19, 2008 at 6:18 AM
RIC said...: thank you raven, gt, deli...i appreciate the feedback.; June 22, 2008 at 12:10 AM
Angelena Stanford said...: good work! i write as well read some of my stuff at http://hubpages.com/profile/angelenastanford and let em know what you guys think--all are welcome and i would really appreciate the feedback!; August 16, 2010 at 3:19 AM